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Experimental Manga Page

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Individual manga images seem a bit inadequate to me somehow- so I decided to try a page-worth of comic sequence- thought up a story and how I might like to begin it- and here you have the finished product. Fairly pleased, really- I seem to have already improved on "Trio"- which was a bit shit, eh?

It's set in an intensive human farm which supplies the earth's dominant (alien) race, with fresh, good quality human meat. The farm is run by collaborator-humans, because the aliens are far too squeamish for the task, preferring their human served up bloodless in nice, neat little packages. The post of collaborator-human is much sought-after by the millions of humans bred each year, since those selected live much longer as they are only slaughtered once they become unable to do their work (at about 30 years because of selective breeding and growth hormones). However, upon selection each is castrated/sterilised to preserve the efficiency of the system and prevent distractions. So the groping going on is not as sexual as it looks! The female depicted is being evaluated for sale possibly to a show breeder, which is why the buyer's human representative cares about about her 'conformation'.

Note: Read right to left (Japanese-style).
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kchuu's avatar
The face grab panel is expecially good :] Great work!!

One thing-- Are the kanji supposed to be sound effects? Normally for manga, sound effects are written in katakana for intense sounds, and hiragana for more comical, or figurative sounds.

Example:
GYAAAAH!! -- ギャーーーァ!!
Silence (like after a non-funny joke) -- しーん。

Stuff like that.... I don't know the kanji written there, so if it's for another purpose, please tell me! Also-- more areas of solid black would balance the page out more :] Like, adding some darkness into the legs panel or something... good job, though! This looks like a good comic!!